I always thought I was a good writer. I would get compliments on my style and lots of social shares. Praise makes a person feel good, right?
However that all changed when I got the awesome opportunity to write a blog post for Mark Schaefer and his {grow} blog.
Here’s what happened…
Mark keeps a high content standard for his blog. He has worked hard to build his community by consistently providing quality content. Completely stoked when he told me in our consulting session I was welcome to submit an article, I went to work.
I picked a topic that is being buzzed about – being human in your business. I thought, easy peasy! WRONG.
The first draft submitted was sent back.
The second draft was also sent back along with a note to not be discouraged.
When the second draft was sent back, Mark was gracious to give me some pointers on how I could write it better. So I took a while between drafts two and three. Meeting such a high standard by someone who I have the utmost respect for was honestly a challenge. It made me question my writing ability. It made me question if I was truly writing fluff. I was thisclose to just giving up on the whole thing. I then emailed a friend and colleague for some advice and she gave me some great feedback that I’m very grateful to have gotten.
I circled my wagons, re-read the emails Mark sent me and started over.
Third time was a charm. Talk about a sigh of relief! And to top it off, Ragan published it as well (with permission from {grow}).
So what did this experience teach me?
- Cut the fluffy openings and get to the point. I tended to ramble in my article openings. That doesn’t provide value to the article. So cut it and get the point.
- There should be more meat than vegetables in your articles. People are reading articles for value and expertise, not fluffy philosophical thoughts.
- Don’t drag on with your points. Make the point rather taking a whole paragraph to explain it, unless 100% necessary.
- An actual visual is sometimes better than an explanation of it. Use video or infographics to explain your point. Sometimes these are more entertaining.
The biggest lesson of all?
—–>Get to the point.<—–
Going back and reading some of my earlier articles I realized I took too long to get to the point. I am now making a concerted effort to cut the bull and get to it in my articles and holding myself to a higher standard of content.
I will be forever grateful to Mark for challenging me to do better. We should always challenge ourselves to do better. It is the only way we are going to grow in our business.
That being said, I am going to challenge you now – find a major blog you admire and make it a goal to have your article published on it. You will become a better writer because of it.

I’ve always subscribed to the theory that less is more!!! [But it’s not always easy to do!]
You are right, it’s not easy!
…but at least we try!!!
Had a similar experience, Mandy, when I first joined Steamfeed.
I have learned so much and yes, I am writing better!
It’s hard but great in the end, right?
I had someone say to me and I never forgot it: Wet it, Wipe it, Goodnight. Basically, stop with the fluff and cut to the chase.
Great advice!
Hey Mandy,
I had to stop by and read this post. Mine today is why I don’t have guest posting rules on my blog but I do accept them. I’ve only written probably a good 10 myself within the last few years but I get nervous about writing them because you either like my personality or you don’t.
Sounds like Mark is very strict and I can understand about “getting to the point”. But I like my readers to connect with me personally so for that reason I probably do have some fluff and things that wouldn’t be accepted on a lot of bigger named blogs. Guess that’s why I’ve never approached them and they haven’t approached me. LOL!!!
That’s very interesting your experience and I’ll have to stop by and also read your guest post. I appreciate you sharing this experience with us, now I’m really nervous.
~Adrienne
Yeah, I too agree with the same.
Great post!
However, the link to the blog below is dead. Curious to read it!